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Thanissaro's translations are... unique. The word being used, as others have pointed out, is "mano", the leader of an irregular group of nouns called the "manogana" - "the group with mano as its leader".
The PED has a huge article on mano, worth reading in full if you're interested. I've copied the gist of it below, but as you should see, it is probably misleading to translate it as "heart". There is a word for that, "hadaya", which is sometimes used as a synonym of mano, viññāṇa, etc., but also refers to the physical heart organ.
It is fair to say he is within his right to use poetic license in this case; it is, after all, poetry, and the mind and the heart are much the same in Buddhism. As you can see below, though, manas generally refers more to the thinking side of things, than the emotive or the substantial entity of "the heart" or "the mind".
Mano & Mana(s); (nt.) [Vedic manaḥ, see etym. under maññati]
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II. Meaning: mind, thought
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- Mano represents the intellectual functioning of consciousness, while viñnāṇa represents the field of sense and sense -- reaction ("perception"), and citta the subjective aspect of consciousness (cp. Mrs. Rh. D. Buddhist Psychology p. 19) -- The rendering with "mind" covers most of the connotation; sometimes it may be translated "thought. As "mind" it embodies the rational faculty of man which, as the subjective side in our relation to the objective world, may be regarded as a special sense, acting on the world, a sense adapted to the rationality (reasonableness, dhamma) of the phenomena, as our eye is adapted to the visibility of the latter.
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- As regards the relation of manas to citta, it may be stated that citta is more substantial (as indicated by translation "heart"), more elemental as the seat of emotion, whereas manas is the finer element, a subtler feeling or thinking as such. See also citta2 I., and on rel. to viññāṇa & citta see citta;2 IV. 2b. In the more popular opinion and general phraseology however manas is almost synonymous with citta as opposed to body, cittaŋ iti pi mano iti pi S ii.94.
As to your ancillary questions:
As others have pointed out, the original is:
manopubbaṅgamā dhammā, manoseṭṭhā manomayā.
manasā ce paduṭṭhena, bhāsati vā karoti vā.
tato naṃ dukkhamanveti, cakkaṃva vahato padaṃ.
Some words used more or less interchangeably are citta, viññāṇa, mano, hadaya, ceto and nāma. Any one of these could ostensibly be translated as either "heart" or "mind". The only one that literally means "heart", as mentioned, is hadaya. The rest have colloquial connotations and are derived from various roots, e.g. √cit = to think, √ñā = to know, √man = to consider, or not from roots at all (hadaya = heart, nāma = mentality).
The technical meaning of the verse is that wholesome and unwholesome deeds come from wholesome or unwholesome mind states, not mere physical acts. In this, Thanissaro's translation is misleading. The emphasis should be on the fact that it is the mind as opposed to the body, not the heart as opposed to the mind.
The origin story about the elder Cakkhupala makes this clear; during his walking meditation, many insects were killed because he was blind. The Buddha spoke this verse to show that Cakkhupala was innocent.
To get an understanding of the colloquial meaning of this verse is a bit involved, but reading the PED's article on how mano is generally used might help. Its usage here does seem to be to emphasise the mental nature of guilt and innocence. Otherwise, citta is a more common word. The word for heart, hadaya, is used when talking about emotion, e.g. hadayaṅgamā - going to one's heart (i.e. heartwarming), and doesn't seem appropriate in this context.
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Here is what I found:
Manopubbangama dhamma
manosettha manomaya
manasa ce padutthena
There's translation and commentary on the page above.
The associated story ("The Story of Thera Cakkhupala") suggests it might be 'intention'.
That's kind of compatible with the poetic use of heart: "he had a change of heart", "his heart wasn't in it", "he did it with all his heart", etc.
The root syllable in each line is "mano" and/or "mana": which can also be found here associated with "mental consciousness"; but see also this says that it's used for "mental action" i.e. kamma.
My guess is that:
An example of one word in English which has many specific meanings is, just to give an example, "run": you can run a race, run a horse, run an engine, run a bath, run a business, let things run their course, run away, run the printing presses, run for President, etc. as described in a dictionary.
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"What is the original Pali phrasing?"
Verse I
Manopubbangamā dhammā manosetthā manomayā,
manasā che padutthena bhāsati vā karoti vā
tato nan dukkha manveti chakkan va vahato padan.
Verse II
Manopubbangamā dhammā manosetthā manomayā,
manasā che pasannena bhāsati vā karoti vā
tato nan sukhamanveti chāyā va anapāyinī.
"and which words are able to be translated freely between mind and heart?"
I'm not sure (see @yuttadhammo's answer), but Thanissaro is using "heart" to translate manas.
"What is the overall sense of the Pali words used i.e. what are the nuances or subtleties to the original Pali?"
Sue Hamilton [1] discusses these passages:
In the Dhammapada however, both terms [manas and dhammā] are being used in their generic sense [not as sense and sense object, as elsewhere in the pali canon]: manas is being used as 'mind' in general, and dhammā is being used as it is in the tilakkhana [2] formula [...].
When these terms are used generically, the precise meaning of the passage has to be determined from context. The [first line of both verses] literally means something like: "Phenomena are the result of mind (or are preceeded by mind), have mind as their best, are mind-made". In isolation, this sentence might be construed as positing an idealistic ontology, that the phenomena which comprise the world as we know it, dhammā, are nothing but the mind: the external world is magically created by the mind and consist of mind. There is an alternative way of interpreting this line, however, which is, in my opinion, the accurate one.
Then she offers a full translation of the rest of the passage. Excluding the first lines:
"If a man speaks or acts with a wicked mind, sorrow follows him as wheel follows the foot of a draught [animal]...if a man speaks or acts with a pure mind, happiness follows him as a shadow always follows [him]."
Then she points out that:
The point of these sentences is that one reaps the consequences of one's actions [...]. This corresponds to the Buddha's definition of karma [volition] [...]. The whole of the first chapter in Dhammapada is concerned with this teaching: that one reaps as one sows, and that sowing is qualitatively determined by intention.
With the above in mind, and in the same vein as @ChrisW answer , "heart" could've been a choice for someone's inclination. Perhaps to avoid giving the impression of an ontological statement.
Finally:
I mentioned in chapter IV that when used in a non-technical sense, 'mind' (whatever term is being used) indicates general mental activity. So the first lines of the two verses in fact have the following meaning:
dhammā are an individual's experiences -- everything, in fact, that is a part of the individual's life. And qualitatively those experiences follow from one's mental activity: manopubbangamā, it is mental activity which principally governs the nature of life: manosetthā, and it is in mental activity that what follows originates: manomaya.
To interpret this sentence ontologically is completely to ignore the context in which it is found and to divorce it from the subject matter of the entire chapter. To convey the meaning of manas in this context accurately, it is better to translate it as a verbal noun, denoting the activity or process of the mind: 'thinking'. In english, this gives us a less ambiguous sentence:
"The individual's experiences are preceded by thinking, have thinking as their best, originate in thinking".
It is the reification of manas as 'mind' which tends to mislead here
[1] Identity and Experience: The Constitution of the Human Being According to Early Buddhism, pg 140ff
[2] The Three marks of existence: "sabbe saṅkhāra aniccā. sabbe saṅkhāra dukkhā. sabbe dhammā anattā"